How's My Driving?

[thalassino]

how's my driving?
a concrit meme

It's been awhile, so! Comment with your character list and people will give you CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM about how you play them.

Any player bashing, character bashing, or anything NON-CONSTRUCTIVE will be dealt with harshly.

Be nice to your fellow players, but be honest too!

BONUS: Name one pro and one con of your RPing that you've noticed as of late.

Comments

[closedcircuit]

Ky Kiske | Guilty Gear | closedcircuit | Anon HMD

Pro: I think I've been reaching out and getting new CR/deepening what's there.
Cons: Ky's very charismatic, and I worry that I've been neglecting that/not portraying it well.

[relinquishing]

His charisma comes and goes, honestly? There's some times where he's really passionate and some times where he just comes across as really really cold - I guess I wouldn't say you're neglecting it, but from what I've seen of his threads, I wouldn't pin him as "charismatic" right off the bat.

[closedcircuit]

Hmm, cold, eh? That does worry me...

I don't suppose you recall which specific threads gave you that impression, do you?

[relinquishing]

The first one that came to mind was this one, but take it with as much salt as you want! I may just be misreading tone like a boss, and I at least know he's not like an icy brick from other threads you've had, so I don't think it's a huge problem (if it is one at all).

[closedcircuit]

Mm, yeah. I think I did a particularly poor job of showing Ky's emotional state in that thread, so it's absolutely valid, and it is an issue. I think it's a combination of laziness -- which I can do something about and will be attempting to do so -- and the difficulty I've been having in general in maintaining emotionalness across threads -- which I guess practice is the only thing that'll really help that, and awareness of the issue, which has been sitting in the back of my head for a while.

Both of those things seem to tend to come up much stronger when I'm quick-threading, so that's something I should take into consideration as well.

Thank you.