Mm, yeah. I think I did a particularly poor job of showing Ky's emotional state in that thread, so it's absolutely valid, and it is an issue. I think it's a combination of laziness -- which I can do something about and will be attempting to do so -- and the difficulty I've been having in general in maintaining emotionalness across threads -- which I guess practice is the only thing that'll really help that, and awareness of the issue, which has been sitting in the back of my head for a while.

Both of those things seem to tend to come up much stronger when I'm quick-threading, so that's something I should take into consideration as well.

Thank you.